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Will You Pick up the Pieces? by ~Captainkoala-7:iconCaptainkoala-7:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


The only way
                      I'll let you
                           love me


       is if I'm sure that


   whenever you break my heart,


                     you'll be the one

                   who picks up the


                                p                c  
                                      i   E                       S
                                                          e
©2009-2010 ~Captainkoala-7
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Will you?

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=Vindicta38 May 23, 2009, 5:57:55 PM
Wow, that is powerful. :O

I love it! :aww: Very nice work.

:clap::clap::clap::clap:

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Words do my bidding! ....... Sometimes...
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~Captainkoala-7 May 23, 2009, 6:04:29 PM
Thank you.

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Once you can accept the universe as matter expanding into nothing that is something, wearing stripes with plaid becomes easy.
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~requiem677 May 23, 2009, 6:54:24 PM
I shall pick up the pieces as they are lost to you now. Instead, I will rebuild you from my own.

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Requiem aeternam dona eis
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~Captainkoala-7 May 23, 2009, 7:06:44 PM
Awww. Thanks!

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Once you can accept the universe as matter expanding into nothing that is something, wearing stripes with plaid becomes easy.
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~XJenniferCullenX May 24, 2009, 3:08:40 AM
Aw, that is so nice. I love it! Very good job :heart:

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Remember, if someone annoys you it takes 42 muscels in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscels to extend your arm and bitch slap that mother fucker!
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~Captainkoala-7 May 24, 2009, 4:45:06 PM
Thank you.

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Once you can accept the universe as matter expanding into nothing that is something, wearing stripes with plaid becomes easy.
:iconxjennifercullenx:
~XJenniferCullenX May 25, 2009, 6:35:46 AM
No problem.

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Remember, if someone annoys you it takes 42 muscels in your face to frown, BUT, it only takes 4 muscels to extend your arm and bitch slap that mother fucker!
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~rihspar May 28, 2009, 4:35:09 PM
yeah, I would like that feeling like that'd always happen.

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"You know, there are these little things that you come by that feel like a big difficulty to us. You just gotta remember, it could be worse, it'll be all good after time... and you need to get up and on again."
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~Captainkoala-7 May 30, 2009, 8:56:31 PM
Yep. That'd be nice.

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Once you can accept the universe as matter expanding into nothing that is something, wearing stripes with plaid becomes easy.
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