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Beautiful is a Subjective Term by ~Captainkoala-7:iconCaptainkoala-7:



Yesterday,
he called her beautiful.

She wished it had gone like this:
"You're so beautiful, so pure, so angelic.
I love you."

It really went like this:
"Hey, beautiful. Wanna go to the movies?
Call me back."

Why are these two comments so different?
He did call her beautiful, after all.
But not the way she wanted.

She called him beautiful, too,
before this.
She said his face was smooth and his hair was soft.
She said she always wanted to kiss his lips.
She said he was beautiful.

Now, she's not so sure.
Because, after all,
'beautiful' is a subjective term,
and although he may have nice hair and soft lips,
perfect for kissing,
he is no longer beautiful to her.

Because, to him,
she was no more beautiful than
any other girl.

"Beautiful" isn't just a name.
It's a state of complete being.

And he wasn't, but she was.
When he hurt her, she cried
and wished she could find someone else
who was just as beautiful as she was
inside.
:iconcaptainkoala-7:

Author's Comments

Define 'beautiful'.

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:icongi-sa95:
Really good. All of that is so true.

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:iconcaptainkoala-7:
Thanks.

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Once you can accept the universe as matter expanding into nothing that is something, wearing stripes with plaid becomes easy.
:icongolden-3point14:
Nice.
Yeah, if a guy ever calls me by one of those kinds of names, I'd first be flattered, and then irritated. |D It's not nearly as sweet.

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Foolish is he who declares "no one is perfect", for this implies he knows enough about perfection to know what is or is not perfect. ~anonymous
:iconsilvercherryblossom:
love the concept, the idea. your very creative and thoughtful! XD
:icondespondentdream:
Part of me sees this as an overreaction, but another part of me remembers that to an artist, it's the little things that matter and the things that we want to stand out. So, we make them stand out. Great job.

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lykewtfyo?
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:iconrubiks-cube040:
I recently went to a conference with my school, and the speaker gave us some advice:
"If your boyfriend ever calls you beautiful ask him "what precisely do you mean?""
LOL.

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-Where you from, man?
-It's hard to say.
-Come on man, just tell me where you're from!
-No, It mean it's a long word, it's hard to say..
:iconredessence66:
Ah man, so true. : )

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Hey 66, 78.
:rose::rose::rose::rose:
:iconmidnight3flame:
awww <3

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“Now, now, my good man, this is no time for making enemies.”

Voltaire (attributed), when asked by a priest to renounce Satan. Last words.
:iconwilliamdestroya:
I think the beginning of this poem but I feel the ending loses it's luster

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~billie d~

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